It uses correct language.
It started with an introduction.
It included details to make it more interesting.
It had a conclusion.
It explains what it is and how the machine works. It even includes the noises that the machine makes.
It explains how the machine was made and what it is made out of.
It describes the shirts that it can make and how they work.
It tells us about the person that invented the machine.
It gives a time period.
It has thought about the audience - aimed at children.
Its purpose is clear.
It is told in chronological order.
That was a good lesson from Leah
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